Weekly Response #6

Reading Response:
  Mercy (end) my 1st Jodi Picoult book. It was amazing, and emotional journey and made me cry. It was a very sad book @Cre8tiveHavoc #WR6
I'm starting to read the book Divergent now, so far really interesting, I'm drawn in! I'm questioning why she has switched to the Dauntless Faction! I hope my question will be answered soon #WR6

Writing Response:
  I am done with the rough draft of my story, all I have to do is add the mini lessons that we learn in the up coming days, I have added the VAKS'ing elements and still have to add some personal details about the characters. I already have 36 tweets completed already so I am well over the minimum number. I will still have to add a few more tweets as we learn more writing variables. The type of Twitter fiction I chose to write was an extended story that follows one boys high school mistake. I chose the extended story because I enjoy to give a lot of details when I write so I thought that was a more natural fit for me to chose the extended story. From the "to do" list I still have to add some character development, and get 3 more original photos. Other than that I have dialogue, and a "so what", as well as the VAKS'ing variables. I have two images that I know I will use, but I am still stuck finding 3 more photos! I really like the theme of my story, and what I have so far. I really like how it has all come together, I am just worried about the deadline now. Although I really enjoy what I have written so far I don't know if it is good enough. What still needs work for me is the character development, and the photos to go along with the tweets. I am really enjoying this writing project and I think it is coming along really well. This is probably my favourite writing task in this class so far! The only question I have is how to develop the character better. I hope to finish this really soon, and after this response I will continue to edit it and revise the old drafts.